An Unexpected Victorian Fantasy

Naviri is ready. It's rushed, but I thiiiink I got everything right. I guess I'll find out. I asked that I could start at average, just given the career choices I imagine Navi making, however I did choose the Nomad's staring package so if that's not possible, I understand.

Thanks in advance.

!	Message from: Muse
	No problems with the Income Tier here. Things look good. I anticipate how you're going to fill out Navi's timeline as you explore her in play! Approved.

Aurélien is ready for approval!

!	Message from: Muse
	Yes. Fabulous. Welcome to Thorns! Approved.

I’m a little rusty on bbcode so don’t mind my terrible-ness.

http://anaxasdiaries.com/viewtopic.php? ... p=814#p814

!	Message from: Muse
	You've got an extra skill—5 at beginner instead of the usual 4—but I'll allow it. Congrats. You're approved!

Django Badi is ready for judgment.

!	Message from: Muse
	Go forth and fill Anaxas with the violin! Approved.

https://anaxasdiaries.com/viewtopic.php?f=39&t=218 Sednai may be a bit unpolished. It was a late night.

!	Message from: Muse
	Lookin' good to me. Hahaha. Nothing unacceptably rough—you've crossed all the T's that I can see. Congrats!

Requesting approval! ;) Maxim

!	Message from: Muse
	Approved, but only if you'll immediately promise to be Tristaan's passive friend 5ever.

I think this is what you want, yeah? I'll fix anything that is needed.

https://anaxasdiaries.com/viewtopic.php?f=39&t=228

!	Message from: Muse
	Looks good to me! Approved!

Here's Elora! If anything needs to be changed, I'm willing to change it:Elora

!	Message from: Raksha
	I’ve jumped in and edited some minor spelling errors, but otherwise, Approved! Have fun!

Here is Voron, looking forward to getting to play him.

!	Message from: Muse
	Good stuff. You're approved! We'll get back to you on Seventen divisions shortly!

I decided to post this for review and corrections.

Character Sheet

I skipped one beginner focus skill in favor of starting Berna with no poor aptitude skill according to the special rules for passives who are gated in Brunnhold. Hope I understood this right.

The gated passives must have a bunkmate and constant co-worker as they always work in pairs. I made a tentative NPC. You find it in the housing and inventory section. I'm totally unsure of if this is the place to put it and I don't know how to do with the NPCs skills. Grateful for help and instructions.

!	Message from: Raksha
	You knocked it outta the park! Approved! Go forth and knock over glasses on the very edge of things!