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Lore Development Opportunities!
Hey hey folks. Muse here.

I'm in the process of making our Lore as rich and beautiful as possible and I can finally admit that it's a huge, daunting task that us admins can't possibly do by ourselves. So, hopefully, there's a few of you out there who want to lend us a hand. Right now, I'm starting small and I'm asking for help making up NPCs scattered across all of Anaxas—don't worry, there's a list and below is the formatting I'm going to need! I'll be posting some examples, too.

If you're even more ambitious than me, please find a FC image and size it to 400x250. It can be color. Please cross-reference the Census to make sure that you're not recycling already used FCs.

Please submit your finished NPCs here in this thread for easy tracking. That way, everyone knows what has been finished and what hasn't.

NOTE!!!!! This is an absolutely no-pressure call for assistance. If you don't want to participate, if you don't feel knowledgeable enough to participate, or if you just don't have the time, you certainly don't have to.

Even one NPC helps, though, and the admins will be submitting finished examples as well.

BUT YOU PROMISED PRIZES! I did. Just wait.


CURRENT NEEDS
Here we are, all the NPCs we need. Every major location on the wiki also has sub-locations that probably list NPCs, but these are the major places to hit up first. We can move on after these are through.

Some of these NPCs already have brief descriptions. USE THOSE as launching points. Thank you.

  • NPC Master List All the names link to either a small description or nothing at all. Every one of these NPCs needs more fleshing out.
  • Brunnhold NPCs and the Brunnhold Course List both list professors. This needs to be cross-checked and each of the professors needs an NPC page.
  • The Stacks NPCs
  • Vienda NPCs some of these overlap with the NPC Master List.
  • Old Rose NPCs
  • Miscellaneous NPCs Each of the wick Tribes need at least a Durg. Additional wick NPCs aren't needed, but they're nice to have.


FORMATTING
I'd like to see all NPCs have at least a couple of sentences for each of major sections, as well as all the basic stats.


Name: Check out the Naming Conventions
Race:
Gender:
Age:
Birthday: (optional)
Kingdom of Origin: Six Kingdoms only, please.
Current Location:
Occupation: Name their business if they run one and link to the location, please.

Appearance: What do they look like? Keep in mind the Genetics and Appearances for each race and Kingdom of Origin

Personality: How can someone write with this NPC (if they're an open NPC)? What is this person's personality like?

History: Where did they come from, what shaped them. Are they married? Do they have children? What are their connections? How did they get to where they are now?

Currently: What the NPC is up to right now. Are they connected to other characters or NPCs? Mention that here.

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FC If you choose an image, please state the FC for reference, thanks.

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[style2="width:90%; margin:0px auto; padding:20px; font-size:1em; line-height:1.25em; color=#373126; background-color:#ccbda6; border: 4px double #977c4f;"][b]Name:[/b] Check out the [url=http://wiki.anaxasdiaries.com/Naming_Conventions]Naming Conventions[/url]
[b]Race:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b] 
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Birthday:[/b] (optional)
[b]Kingdom of Origin:[/b] Six Kingdoms only, please.
[b]Current Location:[/b]
[b]Occupation:[/b] Name their business if they run one and link to the location, please.

[b]Appearance:[/b] What do they look like? Keep in mind the [url=http://wiki.anaxasdiaries.com/Genetics_and_Appearances]Genetics and Appearances[/url] for each race and Kingdom of Origin

[b]Personality:[/b] How can someone write with this NPC (if they're an open NPC)? What is this person's personality like?

[b]History:[/b] Where did they come from, what shaped them. Are they married? Do they have children? What are their connections? How did they get to where they are now?

[b]Currently:[/b] What the NPC is up to right now. Are they connected to other characters or NPCs? Mention that here.

[b]Image [/b](optional: 400px high by 250px wide)
[b]FC[/b] If you choose an image, please state the FC for reference, thanks.[/style2]

If you're not at all intimidated by code (it's really not any more complicated than BBCode, to be honest), I'd be more than overjoyed if you could put your NPCs in MediaWiki formatting. Here is an example of the finished product. It should be self-explanatory, but if it's not, don't hesitate to get a hold of me.

If your NPC doesn't have a FC, you can use Npc-fc-pending-02.jpg (male) or Npc-fc-pending.jpg (female) as a stand in.

{{#invoke: Infobox NPC | default
| image = Npc-fc-pending-02.jpg‎
| caption = Name
| age = XX
| birthday = DD MM YYYY
| born_in = City, Kingdom
| currently_in = City, Kingdom
| race = Race
| gender = Gender
| height = Xft Xin
| hair_color = Hair Color
| eye_color = Eye Color
| fc = FC NAME
| family = Name (Relation), Name (Relation)
| title = Occupation Title
}}

==Appearance==
Needed.

==Personality==
Needed.

==History==
Words.

==Currently==
Words.
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{{#invoke: Infobox NPC | default 
| image          = Npc-fc-pending-02.jpg‎
| caption        = Name
| age	         = XX
| birthday	 = DD MM YYYY
| born_in	 = City, Kingdom
| currently_in	 = City, Kingdom
| race		 = Race
| gender	 = Gender
| height	 = Xft Xin
| hair_color	 = Hair Color
| eye_color	 = Eye Color
| fc		 = FC NAME
| family	 = Name (Relation), Name (Relation)
| title		 = Occupation Title
}}

==Appearance==
Needed.

==Personality==
Needed.

==History==
Words.

==Currently==
Words.
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Wed Nov 14, 2018 8:53 pm

Name: Gwendolyn Malieu
Race: Galdor
Gender: Female
Age:32
Birthday: 56 Roalis 2686
Kingdom of Origin: Brayde County, Kingdom of Anaxas
Current Location: Vienda, Kingdom of Anaxas
Occupation: Captain of the Services Division of the Seventen

Appearance: Attractive and young, Gwen Malieu is the youngest Services Captain in history. An extremely potent Living sorceress, she has earned her snaps through both her looks and her savvy. She is of medium height, a healthy build, and has a reddish-blonde hair that is indicative of Northern Anaxi Galdori. Her eyes are an emerald green, and she always keeps her hair tied back.

Personality: Motherly, that is the world to describe Gwen. She is soft-spoken and patient, but does not hesitate to speak her mind when the time comes. She has learned to take control of emergency situations, and doesn't take no for an answer, especially when lives are on the line. She is one of the foremost experts on treating amputees, and has a 90% success rate with magical amputation of limbs.

History: Gwendolyn grew up in the fertile landscape of Brayde County where her family has been plantation owners of various vegetable staples for centuries. She grew up in the fresh air and rolling fields, around animals and in the dirt. The eldest of two siblings, Captain Malieu was always the kind of young woman to take care of others, from animals to farm-hand children.

It was with reluctance that she left home at ten to study at Brunnhold away from home, but every break found her back in Brayde County at home. Living Conversation was a natural fit and her desire to take care of others had her blossoming in medical studies, but something was missing. It wasn't until a riot broke out in the Stacks during her eighth year as a student that she felt called to join the Seventen.

Succeeding through the rest of her education at Brunnhold and remaining for two years of post-graduate study to focus on healing and medicine, Gwendolyn passed her two years of training at Numbrey and rose to Captain so quickly no one is really sure how it happened.

Currently: Gwendolyn is often overshadowed by the other Captains and their personalities. She is considered the quiet one, but that doesn't mean she isn't busy or doesn't have an opinion. Instead, she waits for the right moment and always comes through with the help necessary in any given situation.

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Wed Nov 14, 2018 9:01 pm

Name: Maura Redden
Race: Galdor
Gender: Female
Age:45
Birthday: 7 Achtus 2673
Kingdom of Origin: Muffey, Anaxas
Current Location: Vienda, Kingdom of Anaxas
Occupation: Co-Captain of the Patrol Division of the Seventen

Appearance: Having lived a hardy life, Maura Redden isn't what many could consider beautiful. She is broad and muscular, with a stern face and hard lines denoting the stress of her responsibility. Her blonde hair is short and always kept clear of her face.. She has a long, hawk-like nose and doesn't smile often. When she does, her teeth are yellowed and small.

Personality: Stern and quiet, Maura rose to her rank through sheer determination. She isn't the brightest or the strongest, but she isn't the type to give up. Having trained for most of her life, she has beaten the odds to be the fastest rising Patrol Captain in history.

History: Maura Redden was raised an only child in the small, tourist town of Muffey, Anaxas. Her father was also a member of the Seventen, as was her grandfather. Their legacy of serving for the protection of their Kingdom is a matter of great pride to the Redden family, and Maura cannot remember a time when she wasn't eager to follow in the footsteps of her relatives.

It was a hard climb.

As an only child and a woman, Maura's father was unsure if she had what it took to become a Seventen. At first, he was very reluctant to even allow her to consider such things, and as he sent her off to Brunnhold, he and her mother advised her to pursue far less physical career choices. Maura didn't listen. She threw herself into sports and dueling. She threw herself into her studies. She made sure to find ways of getting the attention of Seventen recruiters as she neared the end of her student career.

Somewhat controversial even in this time, Maura passed her training and her Ensign assignments with flying colors, quickly bonding with her fine chrove, Lupin, and making a name for herself as a firm but fair bringer of justice on the streets of first her hometown of Muffey and then Vienda once she made Sergeant.


Currently: Captain Redden has been Captain for almost five years now. She is a stalwart and reliable friend to Hanz Morde himself and may be next in line for his Deputy should Lars ever retire before her. She is unsure of the direction Arazmus is taking the Seventen through the Oculus and is very thorough in stamping out the Resistance ... though she is known to be Damen's opposite because of her choices to resort to violence only when attacked first. The two butt heads often, but her voice is often overshadowed because she is still a woman. Her closest ally is fellow Captain Gwendolyn Malieu of the Services Division. The pair often use their friendship to make sure their opinions are taken seriously during staff meetings.

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Wed Nov 14, 2018 9:24 pm

Name: Pinter Lars
Race: Galdor
Gender: Male
Age:51
Birthday: 29 Bethas 2667
Kingdom of Origin: Vienda, Anaxas
Current Location: Vienda, Anaxas
Occupation: Deputy Chief of the Seventen (Second in Command)

Appearance: Always the attractive man, Pinter is the consummate Deputy Chief. He is tall and broad, well-muscled but not overly so. He keeps a trimmed appearance, and grows no facial hair outside a well kept moustache. He is always in uniform, even when off duty, and presents himself with an air of authority and power.

Personality: Goodnatured and optimistic, Pinter is not the type to make snap judgments. This does not mean he's a pushover, however. He is very astute and intelligent, and often observes long before he speaks. He has an intense gaze, even when he is smiling, and many find his confidence and self-assuredness off-putting. He is not a deceitful or overly ambitious man, content to remain Deputy Chief rather than gunning for Hanz Morde's job.

History: Pinter once wanted to be a librarian. While he was an excellent athlete in his student days, championing track and field for Brunnhold across the Six Kingdoms, he was always very much into books. A quiet life would have suited Deputy Chief Lars just fine had it not been for the murder of his sister by two wicks in the Stacks while they were both still students.

Spurred by his frustrations at the lack of investigation to follow up on her attackers, Pinter shifted his focus and decided to join the Seventen and clean it up from the inside out.

And so he did.

As he climbed the ranks and became known for his exceptional service, he caught the eye of Morde himself. The two became partners and eventually Pinter found himself Second in Command.

Currently: Deputy Chief Lars is strong and brave, but he is also known for being very passive aggressive when it comes to making sure troublemakers are weeded out of the Seventen. So far, Co-Captain D'Arthe has evaded or endured all of his efforts to catch the man doing something demoting-worthy, and he is quite flustered.

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Thu Nov 15, 2018 4:57 am

Name: Claude Oreau
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 33 (At death)
Birthday: 18 Intas 2671
Kingdom of Origin: Vienda, Anaxas
Current Location: Dead, body location unknown.
Occupation: Deceased.

Appearance: Standing at average height and with a somewhat stocky frame, this toned man is approaching middle age. He has a thin layer of stubble, with short dark brown hair. His features are sharp, but started to show the signs of some premature aging and creases around his eyes. His right leg is damaged and while he does not need a cane he walks with a notable limp.

Personality: Often quoted saying "nothing is certain", Oreau was described as being incredibly vocal with his opinion and yet able to intelligently debate his way around numerous subjects. Brave and reliable, he always did the best for his peers in the opressing society.

History: In life Claude Oreau was a famous revolutionary who tirelessly fought for human and wick rights. It is unknown if Oreau was married due being far too involved with the resistance activities; but it was rumoured the man held a lover or two. Not that the Seventen could dreg up any concrete evidence on that.

Records show that Oreau was a member of the Anaxi Armed Forces (year 2688 to 2694) serving as a private and later a specialist in tracking down renegades and deserters. Needless to say this line of work did not last; he was injured during an attack while on the Hesee border which saw him loose a large amount of functionality of his right leg. Fortunate in some regards that it was an injury that saw him discharged from duty instead of having to turn renegade himself. While serving and upon returning to society, he saw the various injustices and manner in which the Galdori treated their units, and how as a broken man who had done the noble thing was largely tossed aside when asking for aid.

It was the year 2696, aged 25, that Oreau began to truly convert his energy and pursue rights for humans and wicks. Oreau began to build the foundations of what would become the present day resistance; such faces included current existing powers in their ranks such as Jon Serro, Marcus Ford, Johann Ceres and some of the original gunsmiths collectively dubbed as 'the Dirty Dozen'.

On the 13th Achtus 2705, Oreau was killed in the Rookwen Massacre. It began when he and a few like-minded humans and wicks met to discuss a possible rebellion against galdori rule. However, before such could be finalised they were betrayed by an unknown traitor. The Seventen set upon them, killing everyone at the scene and largely destroying Rookwen Graveyard in the fight. It was due to such groundwork however that the resistance did not fall on that day, instead florishing and growing. As such each year, the anniversary of the massacre, and Oreau's death, is observed (see The Remembrance).

Currently: Deceased, but his legacy lives on.

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Wed Nov 28, 2018 11:24 am

Note: Both of these characters are open for everyone to play.

Name: Stolley
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: Mid 30s
Birthday: (optional) TBD
Kingdom of Origin: TBD
Current Location: The Stacks
Occupation: Owner of Stolley's Tavern

Appearance: TBD.

Personality: Shady. Everything else TBD.

History: TBD

Currently: Owner of Stolley's Tavern. Currently dating Cook.



Name: Cook (Legal name TBD)
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Age: Mid 30s
Birthday: (optional) TBD
Kingdom of Origin: TBD
Current Location: The Stacks
Occupation: Head cook at Stolley's Tavern

Appearance: "Portly".

Personality: TBD

History: TBD

Currently: Head cook at Stolley's Tavern. Currently dating Stolley.
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Wed Nov 28, 2018 11:54 am

Name: Director Sylander Maldonado
Race: Galdori
Gender: Male
Age: 45
Birthday: TBD
Kingdom of Origin: Anaxas
Current Location: Brunnhold
Occupation: Brunnhold branch of the Vienda Weekly

Appearance: Director Sylander is tall for a Galdor. He always slicks his brown hair back and wears nice suits. His face is "craggy", with deep frown lines. He has a gruff, gravelly voice.

Personality: He's very strict and runs a tight ship. Everyone at work calls him "Director" or "The Director". He hates having to employ humans and is very racist against them.

History: Director Maldonado was recruited for the Vienda Weekly right out of Brunnhold. He's worked there for the past 25 years and, in the past year, was promoted and told to move to Brunnhold and try to establish a branch of the Vienda Weekly to boost flagging sales.

Currently: He's working on establishing the Brunnhold branch of the Vienda Weekly. Two of his many employees are Ignatius Vinter and Cecelia Driscoll.

Some of his NPC employees, all of which are open for anyone to use:
(Please note that all NPCs mentioned are Galdori, except for Bernard. Bernard is human.)

First name TBD
Conway: Reporter. Lazy, shoddy writer. Only has his job because he's one of the Director's cousins
Erskine: One of the editors, very dismissive of humans

Last name TBD
Alexandus: Reporter
Bernard: Advertising, Cynthia's "unwilling minion"/secretary
Casimir: Editor
Cynthia: Advertising. Shrill and loud
Violettina: Head of hiring

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Wed Dec 12, 2018 11:29 pm

Name: Durg Fairvine
Race: Wick
Gender: Male
Age: 54
Birthday: Achtus 27, 2664
Kingdom of Origin: Anaxas
Current Location: Anywhere in Anaxas; nomadic lands
Occupation: Durg of the Black Hand tribe

Appearance: Fairvine holds an intimidating appearance. He stands at a tall 5'8" as compared to most of his fellow wicks, with a large frame complemented by a well-built, muscled form. His skin is well-tanned from decades of outdoor travel and the influence of his late Mugrobi mother, while his hair and beard are far darker than the average brunettes and redheads of Anaxas. His eyes, as well, are a dark brown. Scars new and old cover the entirety of his body, along with dark freckles and moles.

Personality: Though more understanding and kind in his youth, years of hostile conditions have left Fairvine an exhausted, angry man. He has always been stern and well-disciplined, but now he leans farther towards abusive, even towards his beloved tribe. He holds a raging hostility towards most people of Anaxas; having grown tired of being feared, hated, and discriminated against in almost every town and city his tribe has come across. Fairvine has become far more controlling of his tribe and its members than ever before, going so far as to not allow them to even speak with outsiders without his permission.

History: Fairvine was born during the harshest winter his parents had ever witnessed. Taos Aarav, the former Durg of the Black Hand, met a Mugrobi witch named Zara Kotara, and it was love at first sight. Taos, the young but well-loved leader, had always hoped for children of his own, and his wishes were made reality when Zara revealed her pregnancy during their second year together. The young couple prepared for their child with the help of the entire tribe, and though they all struggled just to survive the winter, they were blessed with the Durg's first son--Fairvine. He was raised into the unpredictable tribe as the golden child; his father's good leadership paving the way for Fairvine to be an even better Durg.

When Fairvine was only seventeen, Zara was killed by a Seventen officer after travelling into Old Rose Harbor for supplies. Her murder was covered up, the officer tossing her corpse into the waters and leaving it to be discovered by the next poor man that decided to venture outside. Heartbroken, Taos Aarav never really recovered from his love's sudden, unfair death, and died himself a few months later of unknown causes.

This left Fairvine to take care of the tribe, and that he did. He found a love of his own, realizing just how short the life of a wick could be, and had four children within four years. His first child and oldest daughter, Sana Oa, remains at his side to this day. Taos Alo, his second oldest and first-born son, left the tribe after realizing Fairvine's growing anger and weakened sanity. His third oldest and second son, Sa'an Tele, also remains at his side. Finally, his fourth child and third son, Polkos Ira, died only hours after his birth, and the mother of Fairvine's children died with him.

Currently: Fairvine is still traveling across Anaxas leading the Black Hand.

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{{#invoke: Infobox NPC | default
| image = Npc-fc-pending-02.jpg‎
| caption = Durg Fairvine
| age = 54
| birthday = 27 09 2664
| born_in = Nomadic Lands, Anaxas
| currently_in = Nomadic Lands, Anaxas
| race = Wick
| gender = Male
| height = 5ft 8in
| hair_color = Dark brown
| eye_color = Brown
| fc = Peyman Moaadi
| family = Taos Aarav (Father), Zara Kotara (Mother), Sana Oa (Daughter), Taos Alo (Son), Sa'an Tele (Son), Polkos Ira (Son)
| title = Durg of the Black Hand
}}

==Appearance==
Fairvine holds an intimidating appearance. He stands at a tall 5'8" as compared to most of his fellow wicks, with a large frame complemented by a well-built, muscled form. His skin is well-tanned from decades of outdoor travel and the influence of his late Mugrobi mother, while his hair and beard are far darker than the average brunettes and redheads of Anaxas. His eyes, as well, are a dark brown. Scars new and old cover the entirety of his body, along with dark freckles and moles.

==Personality==
Though more understanding and kind in his youth, years of hostile conditions have left Fairvine an exhausted, angry man. He has always been stern and well-disciplined, but now he leans farther towards abusive, even towards his beloved tribe. He holds a raging hostility towards most people of Anaxas; having grown tired of being feared, hated, and discriminated against in almost every town and city his tribe has come across. Fairvine has become far more controlling of his tribe and its members than ever before, going so far as to not allow them to even speak with outsiders without his permission.

==History==
Fairvine was born during the harshest winter his parents had ever witnessed. Taos Aarav, the former Durg of the Black Hand, met a Mugrobi witch named Zara Kotara, and it was love at first sight. Taos, the young but well-loved leader, had always hoped for children of his own, and his wishes were made reality when Zara revealed her pregnancy during their second year together. The young couple prepared for their child with the help of the entire tribe, and though they all struggled just to survive the winter, they were blessed with the Durg's first son--Fairvine. He was raised into the unpredictable tribe as the golden child; his father's good leadership paving the way for Fairvine to be an even better Durg.

When Fairvine was only seventeen, Zara was killed by a Seventen officer after travelling into Old Rose Harbor for supplies. Her murder was covered up, the officer tossing her corpse into the waters and leaving it to be discovered by the next poor man that decided to venture outside. Heartbroken, Taos Aarav never really recovered from his love's sudden, unfair death, and died himself a few months later of unknown causes.

This left Fairvine to take care of the tribe, and that he did. He found a love of his own, realizing just how short the life of a wick could be, and had four children within four years. His first child and oldest daughter, Sana Oa, remains at his side to this day. Taos Alo, his second oldest and first-born son, left the tribe after realizing Fairvine's growing anger and weakened sanity. His third oldest and second son, Sa'an Tele, also remains at his side. Finally, his fourth child and third son, Polkos Ira, died only hours after his birth, and the mother of Fairvine's children died with him.

==Currently==
Fairvine is still traveling across Anaxas leading the Black Hand.
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Mon Dec 17, 2018 1:54 am

Name: Donatien Savatier
Race: Galdor
Gender: Non-binary (uses male pronouns)
Age: 16
Birthday: Vortas 30, 2703
Kingdom of Origin: Anaxas
Current Location: Brunnhold
Occupation: Student

Appearance: Donatien is the image of a nerdy galdori teen. Like the rest of his family, his hair is quite fluffy and wavy; made of red-tinted blonde locks. During the winter the ginger hues seem to shine through, while in the warmer seasons it lightens and appears highlighted.

His eyes are hazel; occasionally more blue but normally a warm mix of green and light brown. Long lashes shield his eyes, a common trait in the Savatier males, and freckles and moles are sprinkled across his fair skin. Most noticeably, two moles sit right beside his nose; which makes him easily recognizable.

He stands at around 5'2" currently, with a lean, slender frame. Never having participated in any kind of physical labor, he lacks any muscle or definition, and his bones seem to almost stick out from his skin due to a lack of fat or muscle.

His eyesight isn't the worst as of yet, but has been deteriorating as he ages, and so Donatien wears a pair of circular glasses whenever he can, especially during classes.

Personality: As of right now, Donatien's personality isn't set in stone. He is easily impressionable and can be molded to anyone's views, but isn't a pushover. He knows his worth as the Savatier heir; completely unaware of his older brother Lars' existence. He has been pampered and spoiled by his parents, but despite his wealthy upbringing remains a kind, caring person. He holds deep concern for the plight of others (though isn't sure of his thoughts on the lower races), and is always willing to help a friend in need, even if it means getting himself in trouble.

History: Born to Lionel and Fleur Savatier in Dorhaven, Donatien was always the golden child. He was a blessing from the start; a gift upon his parents in the form of a sweet, independent baby. He was never one to cry or scream for hours on end, or wake his parents in the night, or get into things and mess up the manor. He was, and still is, a privileged child born into the wealthiest of Dorhaven.

Raised as the firstborn, Donatien grew up being made fully aware of his worth and potential. He was groomed to be the best in all things--polite and well-mannered, caring towards their servants, but still aware of his superiority and duty to the lower races. When he was five, his twin sisters Alouette and Jeanette were born, and in the past year his baby brother Antonin was born--Donatien is a loving older brother for them all, though he can only see them during breaks these days.

At the age of ten, he scored a five in his initiation, and was enrolled in Brunnhold to the absolute delight of his parents. For the past six years, Donatien has been a dutiful student, keeping his priorities in line while still making friends along the way. Despite his privileged upbringing, his kindness towards others has made him generally well-liked among his peers.

Currently: He is nearing the end of his sixth year in Brunnhold. Donatien spends most of his time studying, but also hangs out with other sixth forms when he has the time, and occasionally tutors other students. He is completely unaware that he has an older brother, a passive named Lars that has worked in the university for the last sixteen years.

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{{#invoke: Infobox NPC | default
| image = https://i.imgur.com/9h8RDbM.jpg
| caption = Donatien Savatier
| age = 16
| birthday = 30 08 2703
| born_in = Dorhaven, Anaxas
| currently_in = Brunnhold, Anaxas
| race = Galdor
| gender = Non-binary
| height = 5ft 2in
| hair_color = Blonde
| eye_color = Hazel
| fc = Max Barczak
| family = Lionel Savatier (Father), Fleur Savatier (Mother), Lars Savatier (Brother), Alouette Savatier (Sister), Jeanette Savatier (Sister), Antonin Savatier (Brother)
| title = Student
}}

==Appearance==
Donatien is the image of a nerdy galdori teen. Like the rest of his family, his hair is quite fluffy and wavy; made of red-tinted blonde locks. During the winter the ginger hues seem to shine through, while in the warmer seasons it lightens and appears highlighted.

His eyes are hazel; occasionally more blue but normally a warm mix of green and light brown. Long lashes shield his eyes, a common trait in the Savatier males, and freckles and moles are sprinkled across his fair skin. Most noticeably, two moles sit right beside his nose; which makes him easily recognizable.

He stands at around 5'2" currently, with a lean, slender frame. Never having participated in any kind of physical labor, he lacks any muscle or definition, and his bones seem to almost stick out from his skin due to a lack of fat or muscle.

His eyesight isn't the worst as of yet, but has been deteriorating as he ages, and so Donatien wears a pair of circular glasses whenever he can, especially during classes.

==Personality==
As of right now, Donatien's personality isn't set in stone. He is easily impressionable and can be molded to anyone's views, but isn't a pushover. He knows his worth as the Savatier heir; completely unaware of his older brother Lars' existence. He has been pampered and spoiled by his parents, but despite his wealthy upbringing remains a kind, caring person. He holds deep concern for the plight of others (though isn't sure of his thoughts on the lower races), and is always willing to help a friend in need, even if it means getting himself in trouble.

==History==
Born to Lionel and Fleur Savatier in Dorhaven, Donatien was always the golden child. He was a blessing from the start; a gift upon his parents in the form of a sweet, independent baby. He was never one to cry or scream for hours on end, or wake his parents in the night, or get into things and mess up the manor. He was, and still is, a privileged child born into the wealthiest of Dorhaven.

Raised as the firstborn, Donatien grew up being made fully aware of his worth and potential. He was groomed to be the best in all things--polite and well-mannered, caring towards their servants, but still aware of his superiority and duty to the lower races. When he was five, his twin sisters Alouette and Jeanette were born, and in the past year his baby brother Antonin was born--Donatien is a loving older brother for them all, though he can only see them during breaks these days.

At the age of ten, he scored a five in his initiation, and was enrolled in Brunnhold to the absolute delight of his parents. For the past six years, Donatien has been a dutiful student, keeping his priorities in line while still making friends along the way. Despite his privileged upbringing, his kindness towards others has made him generally well-liked among his peers.

==Currently==
He is nearing the end of his sixth year in Brunnhold. Donatien spends most of his time studying, but also hangs out with other sixth forms when he has the time, and occasionally tutors other students. He is completely unaware that he has an older brother, a passive named Lars that has worked in the university for the last sixteen years.
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