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Thread Review Request v1.0.0
Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2018 11:49 pm
by Muse
Thread Reviews v1.0.0
Once you have completed a thread, you're welcome to post it for review here! Please use the template below and repeat the character information section as many times as needed for the characters involved in the thread.
If you are requesting advancement in an Aptitude or Focus Skill (or both), or if you’re submitting job threads for Income Tier advancement, please don’t forget to link to the other reviewed threads so that staff can make sure you’ve met your required total! If you need a refreshment on what is required for advancement, check out the links above. Thank you!
Please remember you can only advance one tier per Skill per season, but you can also learn new skills and advance one Tier in as many Skills as you like per season.
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[b]Aptitude Skills Used:[/b]
[b]Focus Skills Used:[/b]
[b]Income Tier:[/b]
[b]Advancement Request Thread List(s):[/b] (Please link all threads for each Skill advancement in separate lists, and yes! you can advance more than one Skill at once, whether it's Aptitude or Focus. Those threads can overlap!)
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Re: Thread Review Request v1.0.0
Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2018 8:58 am
by Gale
Re: Thread Review Request v1.0.0
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2018 8:42 am
by Muse
! | Message from: Muse |
Nice work. Your progress is approved. [mention]Gale[/mention] |
Re: Thread Review Request v1.0.0
Posted: Mon Apr 01, 2019 12:32 am
by Charity Valentin
! | Message from: Muse |
Approved! |
Re: Thread Review Request v1.0.0
Posted: Thu Apr 04, 2019 5:59 pm
by Lars
! | Message from: Muse |
Approved! |
Re: Thread Review Request v1.0.0
Posted: Tue Apr 16, 2019 11:11 pm
by Tristaanian Greymoore
Character Name: Tristaanian Greymoore
Aptitude Skills Used: Physical, Social
Focus Skills Used: Combat: Hand to Hand, Professional: Manual Laborer
Advancement Request Thread List(s):
Physical (Expert to Master)
Tristaan is, at his core, a physical character. He interacts in the world through touch, but that touch often becomes violence given the volatile nature of his life choices and the situations he's put himself in. Here are examples of him pushing his physical limits to the max:
Familiar Stranger
A Morning's Trist
Hands off the Merchandise
With or Without You
Taken
Of Pride and Property
Not Quite a Holiday (Solo)
Quitting Time (Solo)
Social (Average to Good)
Tristaan sees himself a certain way and often has to operate outside of that view in order to reach into the lives of others. He has slowly come out of his shell, especially around Sarinah, and begun to show quite a bit of wit.
Jus' a Prelude
The Troupe
Colors of the Heart
On Caoja an' Fami
Must Have Been the Hingle
Fire Power
Professional: Hand to Hand (Proficient to Expert)
Tristaan hits things a lot. This should be obvious in his skills.
Familiar Stranger
A Morning's Trist
Hands off the Merchandise
With or Without You
Taken
Of Pride and Property
Not Quite a Holiday (Solo)
Quitting Time (Solo)
Professional: Manual Laborer (Beginner)
Tristaan has always done the grunt work in life, at least ever since he was discovered as a passive. This Professional skill includes light mechanical skills, some drafting, but mostly physical labor.
A Morning's Trist
Not Quite a Holiday (Solo)
Quitting Time (Solo)
! | Message from: Raksha |
Approved! |
Re: Thread Review Request v1.0.0
Posted: Wed Apr 17, 2019 1:15 pm
by Rhys Valentin
Character Name: Rhys Valentin
Aptitude Skills Used: Physical, Social
Focus Skills Used: Combat (Unarmed), Magic (Perceptive), Magic (Living), Professional (Seventen)
Advancement Request Thread List(s):
Some of these are unfinished, but I'm just going to post this here for later. A few are memory threads that have lingered and/or several thousand words have been written so it's probably far enough in. A couple are completely abandoned threads (other players are no longer here), but I feel as though they should count toward something.
No rush here. I just needed to put this where it belongs before I forget.
Physical (Proficient to Expert)
Those Wicked Things We Do
Smoke and Soot
The Unlikely Bonds
Wrong Place, Right Timing
A Wrong Turn
Actions and Consequences
Those Wicked Things We Do
Summer Season Stroll
What Goes Around
Social (Average to Good)
Smoke and Soot
Midnight Oils and Owls
Crime and Punishment
If that's movin' up
Trials and Tribulations
Propaganda
Hand to Hand (Proficient to Expert)
Smoke and Soot
The Unlikely Bonds
Wrong Place, Right Timing
A Wrong Turn
Actions and Consequences
Those Wicked Things We Do
Summer Season Stroll
What Goes Around
Perceptive Magic (Elementary to Intermediate)
Those Wicked Things We Do
The Unlikely Bonds
Actions and Consequences
The Depth of Perception
Smoke and Soot
A no good double black dog dare day
What Goes Around
Wrong Place, Right Timing
Living Magic (New Skill! Elementary)
Smoke and Soot
Revelations
Actions and Consequences
Wrong Place, Right Timing
A no good double black dog dare day
Those Wicked Things We Do
Seventen (Proficient to Expert)
Those Wicked Things We Do
Smoke and Soot
Summer Season Stroll
Midnight Oils and Owls
The Rats are Swarming
Crime and Punishment
Trials and Tribulations
Wrong Place, Right Timing
! | Message from: Raksha |
Approved! |
Re: Thread Review Request v1.0.0
Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2019 11:00 pm
by Lars
! | Message from: Muse |
Approved! Get that endurance. |
Re: Thread Review Request v1.0.0
Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2019 10:05 am
by Fionn
Character Name: Fionn
Aptitude Skills Used: Physical, Social
Focus Skills Used: N/A
Income Tier: Servitude
Advancement Request Thread List(s):
Physical (Average to Good):
Social (Good to Excellent):
! | Message from: Muse |
Approved! |
Re: Thread Review Request v1.0.0
Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2019 9:51 am
by Drezda Ecks
Character Name: Drezda Ecks
Aptitude Skills Used: Mental, Social
Focus Skills Used:
Income Tier: Wealthy
Advancement Request Thread List(s):
Mental (Good to Excellent):
Social (Good to Excellent):
! | Message from: Muse |
Yay! Approved. |