Thread Review Request v1.0.0

Request that your threads be reviewed for progress here.

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If you're looking to advance your Aptitudes, Magic Skill, or perhaps change your Pathway, submit a review request here!

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Muse
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Tue Apr 17, 2018 11:49 pm

Thread Reviews v1.0.0

Once you have completed a thread, you're welcome to post it for review here! Please use the template below and repeat the character information section as many times as needed for the characters involved in the thread.

If you are requesting advancement in an Aptitude or Focus Skill (or both), or if you’re submitting job threads for Income Tier advancement, please don’t forget to link to the other reviewed threads so that staff can make sure you’ve met your required total! If you need a refreshment on what is required for advancement, check out the links above. Thank you!

Please remember you can only advance one tier per Skill per season, but you can also learn new skills and advance one Tier in as many Skills as you like per season.

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[b]Character Name:[/b]
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[b]Income Tier:[/b]

[b]Advancement Request Thread List(s):[/b] (Please link all threads for each Skill advancement in separate lists, and yes! you can advance more than one Skill at once, whether it's Aptitude or Focus. Those threads can overlap!)

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Gale
Posts: 254
Joined: Thu Jul 19, 2018 6:07 am
Topics: 42
Race: Human
Occupation: Metalsmith | Resistance Gunsmith
: Artful Gunner
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Tue Nov 27, 2018 8:58 am


Character Name: Gale Saunders
Aptitude Skills Used: Physical, Mental & Social
Focus Skills Used: None (all are WIP)
Income Tier: Poor

Advancement Request Thread List(s):
Physical: (Average to Good)
The Gunsmith (S)
Smoke and Soot
Grinding Edges
Mastering the Load (S)
The Unlikely Bonds
Threats and Promises (S)

Mental: (Expert to Master)
The Gunsmith (S)
Smoke and Soot
Mastering the Load (S)
Talking Shop
Threats and Promises (S)
Grinding Edges

Social: (Poor to Average)
Smoke and Soot
Grinding Edges
The Unlikely Bonds
Threats and Promises (S)
When the last of us will disappear
Like shadows into the night
The broken ones, the fighting sons
Of ignorance
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Muse
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Posts: 400
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Sun Dec 09, 2018 8:42 am

 ! Message from: Muse
Nice work. Your progress is approved. [mention]Gale[/mention]
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Charity Valentin
Posts: 129
Joined: Mon Jul 09, 2018 5:41 pm
Topics: 23
Race: Galdor
Location: Vienda
: The voices aren't real, right?
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Mon Apr 01, 2019 12:32 am


Character Name: Charity Valentin (nee D'Arthe)
Aptitude Skills Used: Mental
Focus Skills Used: Perceptive, Living, Static and Quantitative
Income Tier: Wealthy

Advancement Request Thread List(s):
Mental: (Average to Good)
Drown
Mine and Mine Alone
Revelations
Lost Everything
The Depth of Perception
Practical Practice Makes Perfect

 ! Message from: Muse
Approved!
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Lars
Posts: 447
Joined: Sun Nov 25, 2018 1:04 pm
Topics: 44
Race: Passive
: nil igitur mors est ad nos
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Thu Apr 04, 2019 5:59 pm


Character Name: Lars Savatier
Aptitude Skills Used: Mental, Physical, Social
Focus Skills Used:
Income Tier: Servitude

Advancement Request Thread List(s):
Social: (Poor to Average)
Making (Or Breaking) Foundations
Fashion Sense
Hey, Roomie
Feldspar Tailoring


 ! Message from: Muse
Approved!
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Tristaanian Greymoore
Posts: 176
Joined: Wed Mar 28, 2018 7:02 pm
Topics: 15
Race: Passive
Location: Old Rose Harbor
: Ever th' balach.
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Writer: Muse
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Tue Apr 16, 2019 11:11 pm


Character Name: Tristaanian Greymoore
Aptitude Skills Used: Physical, Social
Focus Skills Used: Combat: Hand to Hand, Professional: Manual Laborer

Advancement Request Thread List(s):
Physical (Expert to Master)
Tristaan is, at his core, a physical character. He interacts in the world through touch, but that touch often becomes violence given the volatile nature of his life choices and the situations he's put himself in. Here are examples of him pushing his physical limits to the max:
Familiar Stranger
A Morning's Trist
Hands off the Merchandise
With or Without You
Taken
Of Pride and Property
Not Quite a Holiday (Solo)
Quitting Time (Solo)

Social (Average to Good)
Tristaan sees himself a certain way and often has to operate outside of that view in order to reach into the lives of others. He has slowly come out of his shell, especially around Sarinah, and begun to show quite a bit of wit.
Jus' a Prelude
The Troupe
Colors of the Heart
On Caoja an' Fami
Must Have Been the Hingle
Fire Power

Professional: Hand to Hand (Proficient to Expert)
Tristaan hits things a lot. This should be obvious in his skills.
Familiar Stranger
A Morning's Trist
Hands off the Merchandise
With or Without You
Taken
Of Pride and Property
Not Quite a Holiday (Solo)
Quitting Time (Solo)

Professional: Manual Laborer (Beginner)
Tristaan has always done the grunt work in life, at least ever since he was discovered as a passive. This Professional skill includes light mechanical skills, some drafting, but mostly physical labor.
A Morning's Trist
Not Quite a Holiday (Solo)
Quitting Time (Solo)

 ! Message from: Raksha
Approved!
"Sometimes we are born with the keys
to doors we were not meant to open."
Passive Proverb
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Rhys Valentin
Posts: 262
Joined: Sun Jul 08, 2018 5:06 pm
Topics: 19
Race: Wick
Location: Vienda
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Writer: Muse
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Wed Apr 17, 2019 1:15 pm


Character Name: Rhys Valentin
Aptitude Skills Used: Physical, Social
Focus Skills Used: Combat (Unarmed), Magic (Perceptive), Magic (Living), Professional (Seventen)

Advancement Request Thread List(s):
Some of these are unfinished, but I'm just going to post this here for later. A few are memory threads that have lingered and/or several thousand words have been written so it's probably far enough in. A couple are completely abandoned threads (other players are no longer here), but I feel as though they should count toward something.

No rush here. I just needed to put this where it belongs before I forget.

Physical (Proficient to Expert)
Those Wicked Things We Do
Smoke and Soot
The Unlikely Bonds
Wrong Place, Right Timing
A Wrong Turn
Actions and Consequences
Those Wicked Things We Do
Summer Season Stroll
What Goes Around


Social (Average to Good)
Smoke and Soot
Midnight Oils and Owls
Crime and Punishment
If that's movin' up
Trials and Tribulations
Propaganda


Hand to Hand (Proficient to Expert)
Smoke and Soot
The Unlikely Bonds
Wrong Place, Right Timing
A Wrong Turn
Actions and Consequences
Those Wicked Things We Do
Summer Season Stroll
What Goes Around


Perceptive Magic (Elementary to Intermediate)
Those Wicked Things We Do
The Unlikely Bonds
Actions and Consequences
The Depth of Perception
Smoke and Soot
A no good double black dog dare day
What Goes Around
Wrong Place, Right Timing


Living Magic (New Skill! Elementary)
Smoke and Soot
Revelations
Actions and Consequences
Wrong Place, Right Timing
A no good double black dog dare day
Those Wicked Things We Do


Seventen (Proficient to Expert)
Those Wicked Things We Do
Smoke and Soot
Summer Season Stroll
Midnight Oils and Owls
The Rats are Swarming
Crime and Punishment
Trials and Tribulations
Wrong Place, Right Timing

 ! Message from: Raksha
Approved!
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Lars
Posts: 447
Joined: Sun Nov 25, 2018 1:04 pm
Topics: 44
Race: Passive
: nil igitur mors est ad nos
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Sat Apr 20, 2019 11:00 pm


Character Name: Lars Savatier
Aptitude Skills Used: Physical, Social, Mental
Focus Skills Used: Laundering, Cooking
Income Tier: Servitude

Advancement Request Thread List(s):

Physical (Good to Expert):
1. I'll Cry If I Want To
2. Making (Or Breaking) Foundations
3. Sexual Healing
4. Where There Is No Echo
5. And I Am Consequence
6. No Sunlight (S)

 ! Message from: Muse
Approved! Get that endurance.
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Fionn
Posts: 298
Joined: Wed Nov 28, 2018 11:17 am
Topics: 31
Race: Passive
Occupation: Misery
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Writer: Maximus
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Sun Apr 21, 2019 10:05 am


Character Name: Fionn
Aptitude Skills Used: Physical, Social
Focus Skills Used: N/A
Income Tier: Servitude

Advancement Request Thread List(s):

Physical (Average to Good):


Social (Good to Excellent):


 ! Message from: Muse
Approved!
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Drezda Ecks
Posts: 188
Joined: Sun Jul 15, 2018 12:10 pm
Topics: 21
Race: Galdor
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Writer: Maximus
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Mon Apr 22, 2019 9:51 am


Character Name: Drezda Ecks
Aptitude Skills Used: Mental, Social
Focus Skills Used:
Income Tier: Wealthy

Advancement Request Thread List(s):

Mental (Good to Excellent):


Social (Good to Excellent):

 ! Message from: Muse
Yay! Approved.
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